Hear No Evil (microfiction)



Stacia followed Beelzebub past the river of fire. Pitchfork-wielding demons prodded naked souls to wade through the flames. Anguished screams echoed.

“Down this hall, your punishment awaits.” Beelzebub grinned. “You will listen to Justin Bieber’s Greatest Hits for eternity.”

“Nooooo!” screamed Stacia, sprinting back toward the flaming river.





 Prompt: Write a 48-word story about fire

Comments

  1. MargaretFebruary 5, 2020 at 7:30 PM

    Haha! I don't have any advice for you but I enjoyed your concept of hell.

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  2. KimFebruary 6, 2020 at 12:13 PM

    I think this was a great choice for playing with the "fire" theme (so much doesn't need to be said when it's clear they're in hell!). I love the last line. Thanks for sharing!

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  3. LaissezFaireFebruary 6, 2020 at 3:15 PM

    Tongue in cheek. Hahaha. Rather burn for eternity than to have a Bieber earworm? I get it.
    Color me amused :)

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