Evidence (microfiction)



The floor tasted like blood. Trixie stopped licking when the man appeared, shouting. His mop, thrusting, spread bleach.

Trixie barked as the doorbell rang.

“Good morning, Officer,” stammered the man. “May I help you?”




Microfiction Prompt: Write a complete story incorporating “The floor tasted like…” in exactly 34 words (including those four). 

Comments

  1. Harry HamidJuly 3, 2019 at 3:13 PM

    If the dig would have been faster, he would have been guaranteed to get away with it. And maybe he did...

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  2. D3athLilyJuly 4, 2019 at 3:34 AM

    Oh dear! I don't think this is going to work out for the man.

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  3. Sanch @ Sanch WritesJuly 4, 2019 at 4:29 AM

    Oh this was a good one! Gotta love dogs but definitely not helpful if you're murdering someone

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  4. MynaJuly 4, 2019 at 5:41 AM

    I love the POV, and then the reveal at the end!

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  5. NorthieJuly 4, 2019 at 11:21 AM

    Yes, dogs do love to lick the most disgusting things. A great story in a small package.

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  6. RajlakshmiJuly 4, 2019 at 5:18 PM

    Oh I loved how you left us hanging... will the man get away?

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